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Publish Date: April 24th, 2022
Number of Pages: 228 Pages
Publisher: Independently Published
Genre(s): Dark Romance, Fantasy, Erotica, Reverse Harem

***Warning! This review contains spoilers from the previous book in the series, so continue reading at your own risk! You have been warned!***

To see my review of book 1 – The Never King – Click HERE

Total Star Rating: 4.25 Stars

I’m a china cup that has been broken so many times that I’m never sure if I’m a cup or just separate pieces held together by glue and sheer determination, molded into a cup-like shape. I know how to crack and I know how to mend.”

— Nikki St. Crowe, “The Dark One”

What It’s About:

The official synopsis:

I spent most of my life feeling dead inside — until I met Peter Pan and the Lost Boys…

It wasn’t until Pan and Neverland that I finally felt alive.

But things are not all full of magic and sunlight on the island. There’s something darker and more sinister haunting the forest.

And worse, the fae queen and Captain Hook are ready to fight for control of Neverland and they will stop at nothing to get what they want. Including using the one thing Pan never thought he wanted or needed — me. I’m a descendant of the Darling family and now I belong to him and the Lost Boys.

War is brewing — can the Never King get his shadow back and assume his rightful throne? And if he does, where will I fit?

Or will all of Neverland be in jeopardy right along with my dark, twisted heart?

NOTE: The Dark One is book two in the Vicious Lost Boys series. It is a dark reimagining of Peter and Wendy. If you like your enemies to lovers romance with hot, ruthless, morally gray love interests, you’ll enjoy The Dark One and the Lost Boys. You can expect hate kissing, fighting, bickering, and ‘touch her and I’ll unalive you’ vibes.

Please check the author’s website for CWs

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Okay, but this was a vast improvement from the previous book in my opinion! The previous book, The Never King, definitely felt like a setting placer and merely showed us the world with a basic premise but not much more than that in terms of storytelling….

That’s not to say it wasn’t hot! It just felt like nothing happened at the same time if that makes sense?

…Anyways, this second book just felt like much more was going on and was much faster paced, like it rolled much further along this time around with finding Pan’s shadow and the lengths people will go to acquire it.

The biggest highlight for this installment for me was the inclusion of Captain Hook, who we all know is the arch nemesis of Peter Pan…it was only a matter of time until he showed up in this Peter Pan retelling. BUT I appreciate how he wasn’t just a simple black/white Disney Villain, he definitely has some shades of grey to him here. Those honestly make the best villains in my opinion.

The spice was perfection like I expected in this story! I love the use of magic and fantasy elements to enhance these scenes too, it really makes the series stand out. And all I can say is that those who wanted more Vane are going to be very pleased.

…And I loved that cliffhanger as well too! Super well done!

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He is an unholy sight. And I will never stop sinning for him.”

— Nikki St. Crowe, “The Dark One”

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What I Liked:

That Ending! Holy cliffhangers, Batman! This one was a doozy and I loved it! Made me have to go to the next book immediately.
Captain Hook Showing Up! Captain James Hook definitely added a LOT to the story now that he’s shown up! Pun intended, he got me hooked these books?
There Was More Plot/Conflict! This book just felt more enhanced than the previous one for me, and I think it had to do with the fact that it felt like there was more plot/conflict happening this time around.

What I Didn’t Like:

…Is It REALLY love though?…Sometimes Winnie’s relationship with Peter Pan and the lost boys feels off to me, or that it shifted way to quickly? Like they refer to her as their whore and have turns having a lot of sex with her, but then it’s like instantly like they’re all in love with her too? Maybe call it another case of instalove, but that dynamic feels off to me with these characters when half the time Winnie seems like she’s just a walking, talking sex toy to the male characters. But at the same time, I’m not reading this story expecting a Disney Princess happily ever after.

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Conclusion:

Overall, this sequel was much better for me than the previous book in this series. Everything felt enhanced for me; the plot, the spice, the pacing, the characters, EVERYTHING! I enjoyed this one more, and that cliffhanger ending had me grabbing for the next book ASAP!

Thanks for Reading!

— Nick Goodsell

Publish Date: February 20th, 2022
Number of Pages: 204 Pages
Publisher: Independently Published
Genre(s): Reverse Harem, Erotica, Romance, Fantasy

Total Star Rating: 3 Stars

‘Open up, darling.’ He orders. I part my lips. He gets in close and spits in my mouth. ‘That’s all you’ll get from me.’“
– Nikki St. Crowe, “The Never King”

What It’s About:

The official synopsis:

The stories were all wrong — Hook was never the villain.

For two centuries, all of the Darling women have disappeared on their 18th birthday. Sometimes they’re gone for only a day, some a week or a month. But they always return broken.

Now, on the afternoon of my 18th birthday, my mother is running around the house making sure all the windows are barred and the doors locked. But it’s pointless. Because when night falls, he comes for me . And this time, the Never King and the Lost Boys aren’t willing to let me go.

NOTE: The Never King is a reimagining of Peter and Wendy . Characters have been aged up for this darker, grittier version. If you like your enemies to lovers romance with hot, ruthless, morally gray love interests, you’ll enjoy The Never King and the Lost Boys. You can expect hate kissing, fighting, bickering, and ‘touch her and I’ll unalive you’ vibes. Book one ends on a cliff.

~~Please check the author’s website for CWs.~~

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Talk about short and sweet and to the point!

This was a dark and sexy retelling of Peter Pan, but with a reverse harem twist. I’ll admit it wasn’t the GREATEST retelling one could probably read on this story, but it’s definitely one to check out. It’s one of those books that’s not entirely there plot-wise or character development wise, but more for the vibes and the spice.

With the lack of character development, I’m mainly hoping it’s just because it’s book 1 and that much more of it will happen with the other books in the series. It’s a book that will definitely leave you with more questions than answers, so that’s why I seriously think reading the whole series is how you see the plot and character development as a whole.

This book was very short, so if it was longer I’m sure there would be more development in these regards. But this book can definitely be considered if you’re just looking for something quick and mindless and smutty.

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Maybe we’re all mad, in our own way.”
– Nikki St. Crowe, “The Never King”

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What I Liked:

How the Author Reimagined This Classic Fairytale! I’m very picky when it comes to retellings—I couldn’t tell you why—but this one was a story that really drew me in because of its promise to be dark and smutty. I find it fascinating when authors are able to turn what used to simply be a Disney animated movie and give it such a grittier and sexier makeover for the grown-up version of me!
The Anticipation of More to Come! With this book being so short, I can definitely tell that I’ve only cracked the surface of this story and with three other books in the series, there’s plenty more to come!

What I Didn’t Like:

The Book is Too Short…While part of me enjoyed that this was such a fast and easy read, I felt like so much got glossed over because of how short it was. Like I feel like literally everything would benefit if more was put into this book: the worldbuilding, the descriptions, the backstories, the side characters. When I finished the book, I felt like it was too short and sweet and too the point and there could’ve been a LITTLE bit more fun exploration of this twisted new version of Neverland.
Not Enough Story/Character Development…There’s some very subtle hints with some of the characters, so there’s hope for more later on in the series, but there was just such minimal development amongst the cast, it felt like they weren’t entirely fleshed out. I could be totally wrong about this with it only being one book, but if you want to see character growth, this isn’t something you should expect a whole lot of in this book.

Conclusion:

Overall, It was hot and steamy and definitely lives up to the hype in those regards…BUT as far as retellings go, this one left more to be desired than I’d hoped.

I’ll admit I’m curious enough to want to keep going and see what possibly happens next because there’s some brewing tension with that Fae Queen at the end that definitely has some interest with me, but it really will depend how book 2 goes to see if I see this series being worth continuing